I like autobiographies and since The life of Heidi is one I love it. The story was about a girl named Heidi and both her parents are dead, so her aunt took care of her. One day her aunt took her to her grandfather. Her grandfather didn’t seem to want her but, he had to. Then her grandfather started to like her. She grew up and she became friends with the goat boy named Peter. One day her aunt came and said “ I never should have let you go with that old man “. But Heidi didn’t want to leave. Her aunt said that a ill girl in Frankfurt ( Heidi’s aunts workplace )
needs company. Heidi secretly made a promise to herself that one day she will visit her grandfather again. The ill girl’s name was Clara. Sometimes the maids and servants used to say the house was haunted. So the boss ( also known as Clara’s dad ) came by the stairs himself and to his surprise it was Heidi ! She came the stairs in her pure white night gown and tried to unlock the locked door. Since she couldn't do it she sat down and began to sob. Mr Sesemann ( the boss ) came to her and he saw that she was sleeping. The next morning Heidi was sent home to her grandfather and because Clara could not resist saying good - bye she came with Heidi. When Peter saw them talking together he got jealous and threw Clara’ wheelchair ( she couldn’t walk because of her illness ) down the hill. When he went back Heidi asked Peter if he had the wheelchair and he said the truth. So Peter and Heidi helped Clara to walk by herself and when her dad came to pick her and he was surprised to see his daughter, Clara walking. I like the part at the end when Heidi’s grandfather says “ I was once a old filthy man but, you have made me happy “. My favourite character is Heidi because she is beautiful and kind.
Hi Ida,
ReplyDeletewell done with your story I really liked it. just next time go over your mistakes.