Writing Assesment 3

Ida: Boys Building Sandcastle - Writing Sample

Sandcastle Fun

“Crash” the waves hit the floor of sand.  As I am walking down the beach. I see 2 boys building a sandcastle. When they finish making the last wall of the sandcastle they hold up their bucket and spade.

The sand is running into my toes as I walk along. The salty breeze is flowing along, it is very gentle.The sun is shining very brightly over the thick white clouds. The clear blue sky is reflecting on the calm waves. The wind is hovering over the ocean. People are jumping in the water and playing with their family. I can see the boys having real fun with their sandcastle. The sand is so much like the stars in the sky. The sandcastle is big and mini size of a giants castle.

I think they will grow up to build real castles (  if its their dream ).