Ida : Writing Assessment - Boys Jumping Off
Double Splash
“Splash” . The 2 boys who are sitting on the rough road take a big dive. “Ah” the salty breeze brushes along the busy bridge. The bright white clouds try to cover the light blue sky. I can hear the cars zoom along as they leave a trail of polluted air. The heavy air carries the pollution to a land beyond limits. It is a high bridge. So I think the 2 excited boys must have been nervous to jump off a bridge like that. The wavy waves slowly hit the bridge like the air with a low breeze. The clouds make a great reflection in the water. It looks like a wallpaper of blue with highlights of white.
I think these 2 boys will become great divers one day or another.
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