Writing Sample 1

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My Game of Netball

       

1 netball            8 surprise

2 trees               9 rusty

3 ball                 10 old  

4 skin  

5 warm  

6 coach

7 breath                  

“ Yay, we won “.   As I finish my game of netball. I sit down next to my coach and say, “ Netball is a fun game “.  

I take a deep breath and let go. The wind makes my skin nice and warm. My coach smiles at me. He is real proud of me because I understand the concept of netball. I see the birds tweeting and hearing it is calming me down. I quickly understood their song. The trees gently wave to me as if they were saying “hi” . I could barely imagine I won. In a far of distance I saw my mum. She has a big smile on her face. Whenever she makes that smile I think there is a surprise. I wonder what it is.

I look at my coach and from underneath the chair he took a brand new netball ball and gives it to me. My rusty old one is always in my room as a sign of my netball game .